like the row of milk cans; like what i see of the colors and surfaces of the cans...but....something bothers me. maybe its the top of the picture which i think is a distraction. maybe its the angle of the cans; kind of a boring line. but i don't know how to take the photo any differently. maybe just 3 of the milk cans and shot a little closer, maybe? i do like the urn at the end of the row of cans - kind of a punctuation point at the end of the line.
i knew as soon as i went back for a second look i'd have to challenge my first comment. now i crack up at the orderliness of that line of milk cans as they stand at attention in front of the motley mess of fragmented shapes at the top of the picture, ie, on top of the table behind the milk cans. and the lattice'd board between the two groups just described is kind of a fence, barrier, warning, keeping the two groups apart. so, now i like the "line" better. still like the urn; how did that imposter get in the line?!
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like the row of milk cans; like what i see of the colors and surfaces of the cans...but....something bothers me.
maybe its the top of the picture which i think is a distraction. maybe its the angle of the cans; kind of a boring line. but i don't know how to take the photo any differently. maybe just 3 of the milk cans and shot a little closer, maybe? i do like the urn at the end of the row of cans - kind of a punctuation point at the end of the line.
i knew as soon as i went back for a second look i'd have to challenge my first comment. now i crack up at the orderliness of that line of milk cans as they stand at attention in front of the motley mess of fragmented shapes at the top of the picture, ie, on top of the table behind the milk cans. and the lattice'd board between the two groups just described is kind of a fence, barrier, warning, keeping the two groups apart. so, now i like the "line" better. still like the urn; how did that imposter get in the line?!
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