first impression: would prefer to see this w/o hdr. why? would like to see more detail on the front brick wall, more solidity to the brick as a stuctural component both physically and metaphorically, more contast dynamically with the gravel and the fields. is the building leaning/sagging/fading by physical forces or by wide angle distortion? should we care/does it matter?
second comment: hard to tell if this is a small building or medium size building. my mind tells me it should be small but the image is ambiguous. moving closer would obscure the scale issue but would allow for selective detail (e.g. the bricks). but moving further away could clarify the size/scale of the building in relation to its surroundings. (snall, isolated, vulnerable yet a landmark, connected to some community, perservering through time)
2 comments:
first impression: would prefer to see this w/o hdr. why? would like to see more detail on the front brick wall, more solidity to the brick as a stuctural component both physically and metaphorically, more contast dynamically with the gravel and the fields. is the building leaning/sagging/fading by physical forces or by wide angle distortion?
should we care/does it matter?
second comment: hard to tell if this is a small building or medium size building. my mind tells me it should be small but the image is ambiguous. moving closer would obscure the scale issue but would allow for selective detail (e.g. the bricks). but moving further away could clarify the size/scale of the building in relation to its surroundings. (snall, isolated, vulnerable yet a landmark, connected to some community, perservering through time)
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